This is from A Fine Gold Chain - (working title)
She
was a girl of morals but she would willingly lay down on the sun
lounger and open herself up for him in a split second, should he ask.
But
no, he wouldn't, because Tobias Winter had a much more subtle way of
playing this game, and he enjoyed every second of it.
She
realised he was studying her and placing her glass down she turned
her head slightly to gaze at swimmers in the shimmering pool.
Yay! It worked this week! So glad you could join us. I'm intrigued by your entry and am looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteThanks Patricia. Mighty glad to have made it..x
ReplyDeleteSo Tobias is a subtle kinda guy? Makes me wonder what makes him tick. Her interest in him is a real tease for the reader.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Verity.. I am new in this world of erotica and finding my way.
ReplyDeleteHe is most definitely a player, despite his protestations.. But my girl is on to him..
welcome to the hop, Talia. glad to see you this week. as for you snippet, i have this tos say. "Let the games begin!" excellent first tender morsel (didn't see last week's). looking forward to more and following the score card.
ReplyDeleteThanks Grinelda, for stopping by. Means a lot..xx
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you in the hop. You piece is wonderful with the way it is building tension and the mild conflict here. I enjoyed this. Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteThank you Damian. Am very happy to have made it... Your comment is much appreciated..x
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